What awaits

Wednesday, December 5, 2007

9 ways of looking at ones self

reflections
paint my pains,
along side my facade.

mud-
be one with your dirt
it created you after all.

sky-
reach for the unreachable
dissapointment comes with looking down

bleed-
feel the pains of ignorance
its only matrial items adding to miseray

feel-
second hand emotions tend
to the pain of pleasure

strive-
pushing yourself harder
to end back at the start

create-
abstract portions of reality
pices of your self left behind

dull-
vegatate to something soothing
waste the hours of life you wont have in death.

reflect
looking back once more
find what can define you

4 comments:

longandwindingroad said...

This is very good, despite the spelling mistakes. I like how you work to achieve the beginning-there are many stories that end in the same place where they begin.

Vicious said...

I liked how each thing had a different subject kind off...like sky, blood, etc.

Vicious said...
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DOUG said...

this is really cool, good job


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