What awaits

Sunday, November 11, 2007

heart

"hold out your hand"
he wispers to her
so she does
"keep this in your pocket"
he wispers to her
so she does
"squeez it untill its a puddle"
he wispers to her
so she does
he
drops
dead.

2 comments:

hottest out said...

i like the concept, but the repetativeness could be picked up and worked with. Also maybe a bit more in length before he just dies. Its like HI! nice to meet you! (X.X) dead

PrincessKitten said...

You can't spell....


death