"hold out your hand" he wispers to her so she does "keep this in your pocket" he wispers to her so she does "squeez it untill its a puddle" he wispers to her so she does he drops dead.
i like the concept, but the repetativeness could be picked up and worked with. Also maybe a bit more in length before he just dies. Its like HI! nice to meet you! (X.X) dead
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i like the concept, but the repetativeness could be picked up and worked with. Also maybe a bit more in length before he just dies. Its like HI! nice to meet you! (X.X) dead
You can't spell....
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